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Many Kitchens Today are Equipped with High-Speed Electrical Gadgets GMAT Sentence Correction

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Sayantani Barman

Experta en el extranjero | Updated On - Jan 10, 2023

Question: Many kitchens today are equipped with high-speed electrical gadgets, such as blenders and food processors, which are able to inflict as serious injuries as those caused by an industrial wood-planing machine.

(A) which are able to inflict as serious injuries as those
(B) which can inflict serious injuries such as those
(C) inflicting injuries as serious as that having been
(D) capable to inflict injuries as serious as that
(E) capable of inflicting injuries as serious as those

Answer: E
Explanation:
 The following arguments could be used to justify the recommended phrasing modification:

  • Parallelism
  • Considering two separate truths
  • Modifiers

A: Incorrect
It is an incorrect answer. We wish to underline the severity of the potential injuries caused by kitchen appliances, thus "injuries as severe as" is preferable to "as serious as." In actuality, the latter version makes little sense.

B: Incorrect
This is an incorrect answer. The phrase "such as" provides instances, so if we state that kitchen gadgets " may inflict serious injuries similar to [those caused by] an industrial wood-planing machine," we are arguing that kitchen gadgets inflict the exact same injuries as a wood-planing machine.

C: Incorrect
This is an incorrect choice. First of all, the "-ing" modifier "inflicting" no longer implies that the kitchen devices can inflict major injuries; rather, the sentence now implies that the kitchen gadgets do inflict serious injuries, which is not what the sentence is trying to express. Moreover, the word "that" is used as a single pronoun in (C) without any logical reference.

D: Incorrect
It is an incorrect answer. We can completely avoid the idiom if you pay strict attention to the other material. Again, the singular pronoun "that" has no logical referent because there are no singular nouns in the preceding portion of the sentence.
So even if we completely disregard the idiom, it is safe to omit it (D).

E: Correct
It is the correct answer. (E) is almost identical to (D), with the exception of a better idiom ("capable of inflicting" is preferable to "competent to inflict") and the pluralization of the pronoun ("they"). "These" appears to refer to the most recent plural, "injuries," so we get: "... high-speed electrical devices... capable of inflicting injuries as severe as those inflicted by an industrial wood-planing machine."

“Many kitchens today are equipped with high-speed electrical gadgets” - is a GMAT sentence correction question. The text that is underlined in these questions has grammatical mistakes, and we must select the right response from the list of possibilities. The GMAT verbal section includes GMAT sentence correction.

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