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Even Though Many More Students are Present in the Class Today than Yes GMAT Sentence Correction

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Sayantani Barman

Experta en el extranjero | Updated On - Jan 9, 2023

Question: Even though many more students are present in the class today than yesterday, this number is still smaller than last week.

(A) many more students are present in the class today than yesterday, this number is still smaller than last week
(B) many more students are present in the class today than had been yesterday, this number is still lower than last week
(C) much more students are present in the class today than yesterday, this number is still lower than the figure for last week
(D) many students are present in the class today as compared to yesterday, this number is still less than last week’s
(E) many more students are present in the class today than were present yesterday, this number is still lower than last week’s figure

Answer: E
Explanation
The following arguments could be used to justify the recommended phrasing modification:

  • Parallelism
  • Considering two separate truths
  • Modifiers

Given that, Although there are many more pupils in attendance in the class today compared to yesterday, the total number is still lower than it was during the previous week.

A: Incorrect
It is an incorrect answer. This choice is eliminated because the number is compared to a week using the phrase "than last week", and - the word "lower" is replaced with the word "smaller". Here they have used “lower” for numbers and “smaller” for sizes.

B: Incorrect
This is an incorrect answer. This choice is eliminated because there is no need for the past perfect tense because there is just one event; the phrase, "number... lower than last week" indicates that a comparison is being made between a number and a week. The correct word here is "weeks."

C: Incorrect
This is an incorrect choice. Eliminated due to the following reasons: - making an unreasonable comparison by contrasting the pupils of today with those of "yesterday" - the word "many" should not be used to modify countable nouns like "students."

D: Incorrect
It is an incorrect answer. This option has been removed because the word "less" should be replaced with the correct word "lower." Because this is a situation involving a countable noun, the word "less" might just as easily have been replaced with the word "fewer."

E: Correct
It is the correct answer. It has properly used the words “were present” to denote past events.

“Even though many more students are present in the class today than yes” - is a GMAT sentence correction question. The text that is underlined in these questions has grammatical mistakes, and we must select the right response from the list of possibilities. The GMAT verbal section includes GMAT sentence correction.

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